I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Cody, I really enjoyed watching and reading your blog post about Playing To Win it was very interesting and the answers were in full sentences, maybe next time you could add more information into the slideshows.
I like how you have put all your work onto slides like last time. It is a great way to showcase your creativity rather than just a simple blog. I agree with your peer Shelby, I would like to see some more detail and information. Specifically, I am not signing off on your "Responsibility" blog post. Think about some of the roles you have at school. What is required of you each day, do you have extra responsibilities?
I would like to see you working on lengthening your writing and adding more ideas and details. Please have another look at that task.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Cody,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching and reading your blog post about Playing To Win it was very interesting and the answers were in full sentences, maybe next time you could add more information into the slideshows.
Kind regards,
Shelby
Hi Cody
ReplyDeleteI like how you have put all your work onto slides like last time. It is a great way to showcase your creativity rather than just a simple blog. I agree with your peer Shelby, I would like to see some more detail and information. Specifically, I am not signing off on your "Responsibility" blog post. Think about some of the roles you have at school. What is required of you each day, do you have extra responsibilities?
I would like to see you working on lengthening your writing and adding more ideas and details. Please have another look at that task.
- Miss Birtch