This week we had to choose an image from an image board.
The name of the story is Trapped
I chose this image.
Once there was some called Kenny. He was walking in the forest then he slipped down a hill and fell into a whole. He was stuck. He found some supplies. There was a sledgehammer. Heaps of wood and 30 watermelons. luckily the water melons were a source of food and water. It took him 3 weeks but he had escaped. He had to build A spiral staircase but he had escaped.
Kia ora Cody, thank you for sharing your creative writing inspired by the photo. Great idea to include the image! I liked your writing and the variety of sentence types you used, I can tell you have gained something from our Sentence Workshops! I would like to see you adding more detail and length to your paragraphs.
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