I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I wonder if all the criteria was met for your slideshow you created with Zack. Some of your slides look a little bit bare. I wonder also if you could have added more of a description to your blog post explaining what the task was?
Hi Cody It is Ashton from HHS I like how you put songs in every slide. Maybe you make your slide more detail. I remember when I did this. my favorite singer is stan walker. what is your favorite singer or band?
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Hi Cody
ReplyDeleteI wonder if all the criteria was met for your slideshow you created with Zack. Some of your slides look a little bit bare. I wonder also if you could have added more of a description to your blog post explaining what the task was?
- Miss Birtch
Good job Cody
ReplyDeletearent we ment to do 12 slides not 5 and you should do more writing
ReplyDeleteHi Cody nice work next time you can put more information about singers nice work cody and zack
ReplyDeleteHi Cody
ReplyDeleteIt is Ashton from HHS I like how you put songs in every slide. Maybe you make your slide more detail. I remember when I did this. my favorite singer is stan walker. what is your favorite singer or band?