I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you shared a DLO version of your Japanese introduction. I also like how you made the connection to it being similar to a mihi. I wonder, could you also share the photo of the writing you did on the paper?
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Konichiwa Cody!
ReplyDeleteI like how you shared a DLO version of your Japanese introduction. I also like how you made the connection to it being similar to a mihi. I wonder, could you also share the photo of the writing you did on the paper?
- Miss Birtch