I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I am pleased to see what an eye catching DLO you were able to create within the short time frame we had for blogging. I can tell you worked well and got your task complete. I would like to see you adding some more details about your work to your introduction. Maybe try explaining why we are doing the specific learning task and how that ties into what we are learning about.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Cody
ReplyDeleteI am pleased to see what an eye catching DLO you were able to create within the short time frame we had for blogging. I can tell you worked well and got your task complete. I would like to see you adding some more details about your work to your introduction. Maybe try explaining why we are doing the specific learning task and how that ties into what we are learning about.
- Miss Birtch