When I would leave the house they would... Jump in there little shoe box car and drive away. Then they would go to the docks and jump in a shoe box boat and float away. They would sail around the world and go to different places. After that they would sail back to the docks. They would jump back into their shoe box car and drive to the shoe shop. Then they would get sold for $100. After they would run away and go back home. They would chase the dog around. After they would jump back in the shoe rack and be their when I get back.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, June 21, 2019
If My Shoes Were Alive
Today For community time we had to write about what if our shoes were alive. Here is my work.
When I would leave the house they would... Jump in there little shoe box car and drive away. Then they would go to the docks and jump in a shoe box boat and float away. They would sail around the world and go to different places. After that they would sail back to the docks. They would jump back into their shoe box car and drive to the shoe shop. Then they would get sold for $100. After they would run away and go back home. They would chase the dog around. After they would jump back in the shoe rack and be their when I get back.
When I would leave the house they would... Jump in there little shoe box car and drive away. Then they would go to the docks and jump in a shoe box boat and float away. They would sail around the world and go to different places. After that they would sail back to the docks. They would jump back into their shoe box car and drive to the shoe shop. Then they would get sold for $100. After they would run away and go back home. They would chase the dog around. After they would jump back in the shoe rack and be their when I get back.
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