I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Cody! Wow, your blog post contains a lot of interesting information! Thanks for including some information about Phytoplankton, did you know they produce 3 times more oxygen per year than a tree in the Amazonian Forest? Maybe next time you could include some photos of plastic in the ocean. All in all, you have written a great blog.
Hello Cody I really like your blog post about how the ocean is dying and how there is plastic in the ocean that is killing the fish, and other sea animals in the ocean I also like how you added good information about the ocean in your blog post. But maybe you could add another picture at the end about the ocean but this is a good blog post.
Hi Cody great work there are very interesting facts about you news article. I like your idea by taking out plastic and using biodegradable items. One thing you can fix is to add a picture to make look nice. Great work Cody Keep it up.
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ReplyDeleteWow, your blog post contains a lot of interesting information! Thanks for including some information about Phytoplankton, did you know they produce 3 times more oxygen per year than a tree in the Amazonian Forest? Maybe next time you could include some photos of plastic in the ocean. All in all, you have written a great blog.
Hello Cody I really like your blog post about how the ocean is dying and how there is plastic in the ocean that is killing the fish, and other sea animals in the ocean I also like how you added good information about the ocean in your blog post. But maybe you could add another picture at the end about the ocean but this is a good blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi Cody great work there are very interesting facts about you news article. I like your
ReplyDeleteidea by taking out plastic and using biodegradable items. One thing you can fix is to add a picture to make look nice. Great work Cody Keep it up.