I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Good job Cody. This is a little bit of a shorter post but supplys me with all the data I need. Your documents have plenty of information which makes this post amazing. Next time could you write a little more. Your topic is homelessness could you elobarate on it a bit more.
Hello Cody my name is Jesse I think you done a good job but next time maybe you could add a bit more and put the google doc and publish it on you blog and maybe you could do something else instead of homelessness. But I think you done a good job
Hi Cody I have read some of your blog posts I think your blog posts are really cool because I think that you have done a lot of work but maybe some other people didn't I didn't cause I don't have a provocation no but I would quite like to know how did you get all these wonderful ideas
Good work Cody it was a short and sweat blog. it made me think about all the homelessness in the world as its a really bad issue. the one thing I would change is to make it a bit bigger.
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Good job Cody.
ReplyDeleteThis is a little bit of a shorter post but supplys me with all the data I need.
Your documents have plenty of information which makes this post amazing.
Next time could you write a little more.
Your topic is homelessness could you elobarate on it a bit more.
Hi Cody I like how you have gave the link for more information next time put bigger introduction great work Cody keep going.
ReplyDeleteHello Cody my name is Jesse I think you done a good job but next time maybe you could add a bit more and put the google doc and publish it on you blog and maybe you could do something else instead of homelessness. But I think you done a good job
ReplyDeleteHi Cody I have read some of your blog posts I think your blog posts are really cool because I think that you have done a lot of work but maybe some other people didn't I didn't cause I don't have a provocation no but I would quite like to know how did you get all these wonderful ideas
ReplyDeleteGood work Cody it was a short and sweat blog. it made me think about all the homelessness in the world as its a really bad issue. the one thing I would change is to make it a bit bigger.
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