Today we were working on the 200 word challenge. Its about a whale chasing a person.
The person was on a boat fishing. He caught something but couldn’t pull. it out of the water. He tried and tried and tried but just couldn’t pull it up. So he dropped the anchor of the boat and put his scuba gear on and grabbed his torch. He jumped in and started following the anchor chain down when he got to the bottom he turned on his torch. There were heaps of fish and moving objects. Then he saw a big moving object coming at him. He started climbing the chain as fast as he could. The object was getting closer and closer. He made it to his boat and tried to start his boat but it wouldn’t. BANG! Some hit his boat. He quickly switched his oxygen tank and grabbed a spear gun and shot the thing. Then he noticed it was a whale shark. BANG! His boat started sinking. He didn’t know what to do. Then he realised he had an inflatable life raft. He threw it out then the whale ate it. He jumped into the water and the whale started chasing him. Then it ate him. He was never seen again.
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