For pink shirt day we had to answer some questions.
What sort of things makes a good friend? Someone who stands up for you and someone you helps you out.
What do people that care about us do? They help us and be nice.
How do you know they have got your back? They be nice and help you when you are getting bullied.
What don't they do? Bully you and be mean.
What do you thing being an out stander is? Being really good and helping
How did you think the pink shirt boys show that they are friends? They got everyone to were pink shirts and stand up for bullying.
Hi Cody
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your answers for our Pink Shirt Day blogging questions. I am pleased that you are completing the work within our given time frame. A suggestion for how your writing can improve would be to make sure that your sentences have lots of great details. When we look at your sentences, we should know what the question is asking, it's not just the answer. For example:
"Bully you and don't be mean" on it's own, doesn't tell us what the question is. But if you add in some more detail such as, " A good friend doesn't bully you or be mean" can you see how your message is more clear?
I would like to see you trying that for future blogs posts.
- Miss Birtch