I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Much better on your timeline. You quickly took your feedback and fixed up this DLO. I am really pleased with how your work turned out. A suggestion for next time would be to add some more of an introduction about our task!
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Kia ora Cody
ReplyDeleteMuch better on your timeline. You quickly took your feedback and fixed up this DLO. I am really pleased with how your work turned out. A suggestion for next time would be to add some more of an introduction about our task!
- Miss Birtch