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Monday, July 31, 2017

My wierd holiday Writing

WALT write similes and adjectevs in our storys

My Holiday
On saturday the 15th at 9 o'clock me Devan and Mum drove to the Horncastle arena LEGO Brick Show.   Devan is my 7 year old little brother. There were tons of lego structures. Mum kindly bought 2 classic lego sets for Me and Devan.
I felt a little pleased when Mum bought it for me.


Then we drove causally away When we got there we check ed into the Motel. An hour later we slowly walked to the thermal pool. The pools  we swam in were lazy river, 40 degree pool and the big pool. The lazy river moved quickly like a rabbit.Not long after the pools we walked to a place to have tea. The next day we walked to the lolly pot. After one day we drove away.
were do you think we went.

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