I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today we did Freeze Frames. The way we do a freeze frame is we pretend to do something then we counted to three then froze. We were pretending we were at the beach and we were digging, and it was about our physical well being.
I like the way you used the steps and people kneeling and sitting. It made the Freeze frame look active and interesting. One person is partly hidden though so you could have spread out a bit. How does being physically active help your health?
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I like the way you used the steps and people kneeling and sitting. It made the Freeze frame look active and interesting. One person is partly hidden though so you could have spread out a bit. How does being physically active help your health?
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