I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
you truly are an enthusiastic boy who dreams of being sky high I think this matches your style and I knew you wanted to be a pilot and I think you would have some weird comments for the crash and uh burn -Brad
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you truly are an enthusiastic boy who dreams of being sky high I think this matches your style and I knew you wanted to be a pilot and I think you would have some weird comments for the crash and uh burn
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Thanks and how did you know that I wanted to be a pilot
DeleteMy favourite bit is know what you want to be when u grow up being a pilot would be a great opportunity
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